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= Florin
Corina Gina Papouis
[11.May.09 21:08]
Would you (kindly!) consider replacing 'which' with 'who' - 6th verse?
Otherwise a splendid poem that touches the heart in many places at once.
Regards,
Corina
= Corina
florin caragiu
[11.May.09 23:11]
Of course, I have modified, thank you very much, Corina.

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= Florin	Corina Gina Papouis [11.May.09 21:08]
Would you (kindly!) consider replacing 'which' with 'who' - 6th verse? Otherwise a splendid poem that touches the heart in many places at once. Regards, Corina

= Corina	florin caragiu [11.May.09 23:11]
Of course, I have modified, thank you very much, Corina.