| + the song | Anca Veronica Anghel [05.Nov.03 19:21] |
| The song is always for sailors Ghio :) Nice poem indeed. | |
| = Specify | Axel Lenn [05.Nov.03 19:50] |
| "They sing that beach in Hawaii"... Sing of/on/by... it sounds unusual the way you left it... | |
| = Axel, I've fixed the error | Laurenþiu Orãºanu [06.Nov.03 01:45] |
| Thanks, Axel. It was my mistake. By the way, how did you like my poem ? | |
| + my first star | Diana Pascu Chifane [06.Nov.03 10:03] |
| Hm, always sailors have women in all harbours. That's why any man wants in a moment of his life to be one of them... of sailors, of course.:)) But the poem has its melodicity and I like it. | |
| = Cool, actually | Axel Lenn [06.Nov.03 11:59] |
| It's quite refreshing, liked the picture you provided... | |
| = three of the kind | Laurenþiu Orãºanu [07.Nov.03 04:02] |
| Anca, Diana Thank you for your warm welcome. This is my first poem in English and there are only two other such attempts. Ghiocel | |