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= It's in the words...!
Raluca Daciada Manole
[11.Nov.03 18:27]

I am particularly impressed by the musicality of your poem. Still, some stanzas, especially the last ones should be modified a little in order to achieve the appropriate number of syllables. To what concerns the theme of your poem, i must admit that it is not a new one, but the idea of creating and destroying at the same time through art is quite original (For I will create and I will destroy;
Me and my pen, we have the power of Troy!) and it obviously points out to the ambivalent force of words.

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= It's in the words...!	Raluca Daciada Manole [11.Nov.03 18:27]
I am particularly impressed by the musicality of your poem. Still, some stanzas, especially the last ones should be modified a little in order to achieve the appropriate number of syllables. To what concerns the theme of your poem, i must admit that it is not a new one, but the idea of creating and destroying at the same time through art is quite original (For I will create and I will destroy; Me and my pen, we have the power of Troy!) and it obviously points out to the ambivalent force of words.