| = welcome | Anca Anghel Novac [03.May.04 04:23] |
| A poem about life and death, about what is and what is not important, about freedom and thinking. A poem about a daughter missing her mother. Welcome and keep writing. Interesting poetry. | |
| = As you came do not let us waiting | Mihaela Maxim [03.May.04 18:48] |
| Nice and gentle. Thank you. | |
| + star | Anca Anghel Novac [03.May.04 20:04] |
| missed the star | |
| = Yes | Daniel Dinescu [04.May.04 15:16] |
| Welcome and congratulations for a first poem in English! I like your text, though I really think is a little bit longer than it should me, but that's not my decision. "Versus the coming darkness" - I don't like this expresion, but taken as a whole, the poem is a success! :) Hope you will continue the same way! Daniel | |
| = en memorial | Bethany Lerie [04.May.04 20:50] |
| I can see this etched in stone, a memorial to a life lived fearlessly. bravo! keep it up, your words are a blessing. | |