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 =  A matter of words
Bogdan Matei Alecu
[06.Jun.04 07:14]
Just a question about word choice: I do not understand the construction "In saint His chest". Is it supposed to be inside His chest or in His saintly chest? Or is it supposed to be something else? If it's a poetic licence I'll shut up about it, but if not could you please clarify it? Other than that, all's well and this style works for you.

 =  poetic licence
Mihaela Maxim
[11.Jun.04 16:35]
mabe not inspired, but still wanting to be a " poetic licence "...thank you for reading, passing by and for this comment




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