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 =  miha - typo
Corina Dragomir
[18.Jul.04 18:39]
if you used the present perfect simple then you should have known that a past participle verb had to follow the auxiliary verb "have".
e.g come - have come
came (simple past)
bury instead of burry

Anyway it is a nice poem.
"the flower of silence kneeling at your feet"

Cory

 =  sorry
Mihaela Maxim
[03.Aug.04 11:14]
I don't know why the english messages don't arrive at my mail box... thank you. you're right. I'm glad that you like it. I came here from your pages, running through your messages... thank you




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