| = ' frozen in a different time' | Motoc Lavinia [22.Oct.04 10:30] |
| There are many things I liked in your poem and one is the doll itself. If I were you I would have not become so explanatory at the end of the poem, let the mistery float, let the reader imagine... | |
| = Creative | Diana Pacuraru [04.Jan.05 01:09] |
| I love this poem. I don't know what is going on with me tonight, but I "bumped" only into good poems. Maybe that is because I wrote one about Jim Morrison himself and he gave me a little guidance. This is one of the poems that I will remember, because it left an eerie and yet glowing taste on my lips. And I love the first four words, they say it all. You know you're right :))) | |