| = ancamariam's evening poem | Luminita Suse [06.Nov.04 22:49] |
| Anca, I've just started to read your poems, and the first one I came across is this one. I really enjoyed its easiness in reading and rhyming, and its melodious flow. Great lyrics for a song! | |
| = birds | Daniel Dinescu [09.Nov.04 00:11] |
| Yes, it is a nice poem, but I would suggest that you renounce at "the" birds, at this article. Nice melody, indeed. :) daniel | |