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 =  corecteaza
Ioana Stefanescu-Bogdan
[31.Mar.05 18:06]

Sincer, primele doua versuri nu mi se pare ca au ceva comun cu poezia. Poate schimbi.
Corect: "de fapt" si "nu te gândi"




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