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mihail policarp
[13.Feb.08 09:47]
prima strofa mi-a placut;mai ales oamenii intrasera in urme;imi pare un poem in sine;a doua strofa(desi are imagini interesante,indraznete)e previzibila;eu as fi mers(asta nu inseamna nimic)pe ceva de genul...cu cat intrau mai adanc in urme cu atat urcau mai mult



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