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antuna
[27.May.02 01:15]
draga adiemusmagic, poezia imi place cum imi plac de obicei poeziile tale..totusi am cateva obiectii

-in ultimele patru versuri ai numai rima cu verbe la gerunziu-nu da bine

-fior si dor in acelasi vers-nu-mi place

-in schimb imi place mult"si viata s-o primesti dansand lumina", ca si trecere de la inimile moi la sufletele vaste



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