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Madalin Ciortea
[17.May.07 16:31]
Ai pus suflet, este evident. Insa cred ca daca ai incerca sa abstractizezi putin, sa concentrezi expresia, sa indepartezi surplusul si sa dai o nuanta forte metaforei - cred ca ar fi un poem foarte izbutit.

Expresia "lumi albe" mi-a adus aminte de o melodie omonima a lui Florin Chilian.




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