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= maya
AlexRed
[08.Jul.02 15:48]
parca nu e prea convingator...
= e bine
lalo
[08.Jul.02 17:26]
faina treaba. un singur vers deranjeaza, "omuleti disperati", care scurtcircuiteaza din start finetea randurilor urmatoare. "omuleti" si "disperati" nu prea merg impreuna, si, oricum, it doesn't match cu cele ce urmeaza. incearca altceva. in rest, e bine.

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= maya	AlexRed [08.Jul.02 15:48]
parca nu e prea convingator...

= e bine	lalo [08.Jul.02 17:26]
faina treaba. un singur vers deranjeaza, "omuleti disperati", care scurtcircuiteaza din start finetea randurilor urmatoare. "omuleti" si "disperati" nu prea merg impreuna, si, oricum, it doesn't match cu cele ce urmeaza. incearca altceva. in rest, e bine.