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 =  atentie mai mare
antuna
[21.May.02 00:27]
-in primul rand ai scris impreuna"
uneimici"

-in al doilea rand "iubirea-boala grea" suna a cantec de nunta

-in al treilea rand:sfat: incearca metafore, incearca sa creezi imagini, ca oricine poate sa puna epitete langa un substantiv si sa se vaite



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