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 =  paianjenul..
M_lupisor
[08.Oct.02 07:22]
de ce am impresia ca este ceva lipsa?sa nu spui ca asa ai vrut ca-ti fac seppuku..in afara ca strofa 1 pare (daca nu cumva este!)dicteu automat,strofa 2 se remarca prin prozaism.in rest ..e bine..




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