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 =  2 sugestii
emilio
[28.Oct.02 01:32]
1.sugestie nu mai incepe poezia spunand ca tema textului tau nu are solutionare, decat daca reusesti sa surprinzi cititorul. si aici nu ai reusit.
2. scapa de "caci" daca in proza mai merge in poezie e devastator



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