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= interesant
peta02
[06.Jan.03 01:19]
Interesant..cu putine greseli gramaticale, asta din cate am reusit eu sa vad. Totusi..in prima strofa..cred ca mergea "I would have hidden".
= The story of my life
rozi
[07.Jan.03 08:42]
Daca nu e pura imaginatie, poezia ta ma face sa jur ca am avut de-a face cu acelasi drac . :)
Cred ca "I would have run!/I would hide" merge f.f. bine.Din ce-mi aduc eu aminte.Si daca nu e corect , pacat , caci "I would hide " da ritmul si " melodia " care m-au facut sa citesc poezia pana la capat .
Imi place stilul.
"He took me into a dark forest of misery,
shadows of anguished souls surrounded me. "
Imaginea asta e vie! I like it!
I could swear is the same guy!

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= interesant	peta02 [06.Jan.03 01:19]
Interesant..cu putine greseli gramaticale, asta din cate am reusit eu sa vad. Totusi..in prima strofa..cred ca mergea "I would have hidden".

= The story of my life	rozi [07.Jan.03 08:42]
Daca nu e pura imaginatie, poezia ta ma face sa jur ca am avut de-a face cu acelasi drac . :) Cred ca "I would have run!/I would hide" merge f.f. bine.Din ce-mi aduc eu aminte.Si daca nu e corect , pacat , caci "I would hide " da ritmul si " melodia " care m-au facut sa citesc poezia pana la capat . Imi place stilul. "He took me into a dark forest of misery, shadows of anguished souls surrounded me. " Imaginea asta e vie! I like it! I could swear is the same guy!