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usor,trupul in exces
Lucian Preda
[30.Jun.03 10:14]
Prea mult folosesti cuvintele "usor,trupul" iar aceste cuvinte nu dau continuitate poeziei.
Fara intentie de rascolire a sentimentelor.
Lucian
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