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 =  Ciorapii
Andu Moldovean
[24.Jun.04 14:24]
Leit-motivul "Bocancii imi strivesc ciorapii" este prea... prozaic pentru o poezie. Suna mai degraba a hip-hop :-)Incearca sa-l schimbi. In rest, poezia mi se pare buna.
 =  Reformulez
Iulian Proca
[16.Feb.04 16:30]
Ok reformulez: bocancii imi strivesc imi strivesc geninchii si sufletul



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