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Te rog sa mai lucrezi a doua strofa.

Iata cum: "Nu sunt decat o randunica,/ care daca tu n-ai exista, eu n-as putea zbura" - incorect

Corect: "Nu sunt decat o randunica/ ce n-ar putea zbura daca tu n-ai exista"

De asemeni, te rog sa lasi spatii libere dupa semnele de punctuatie. Uite, cum fac eu.:)

Multumesc



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