Members comments:

 =  Roxana
simona marcu
[03.Nov.04 11:17]
De la versul 14 pana la final duritatea fortata nu iti avantajeaza poezia.E ca si cum ai fi vrut cu orice pret sa sochezi si ai gasit cuvintele necesare.Depaaarte de mine pudibonderia, numai ca aici imi pare o exhibare exagerata.In rest frumos, scrie in continuare.




To be able to add comments you must be browsing using the language this text uses.

Use the existing link (near text registration date), or choose the specific language and acces this text again.

Go back !