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 =  un text bun...foarte bun
Fanache Emil
[03.Feb.05 01:17]
Salut! Textul e bun... ai potential! Contine sintagme cu un efect stilistic deosebit:"Alunec\in frunze stacojii";"pasul desfrunzit\ grabit" etc. Finalul este de exceptie(parerea mea) in opinia mea el transpunandu-te decisiv din plan real in plan vegetal, din om intr-o biata frunza(sper ca am inteles bine!).
Ialin



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