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Ioana Stefanescu-Bogdan
[14.Apr.05 18:02]

Incearca sa schimbi versul "Golul vietii ce te-nsfaca candid", e o cacofonie acolo.
Si corecteaza greselile de typo - spatiu dupa fiecare semn de punctuatie- cu optiunea "poti edita acest text".




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