| = these lonely road | Muºat Dana [22.Oct.05 15:30] |
| I think is an incredible poetry, the images are very well build. Of course i'm just a begginer here, but my senses are telling me that this text is about feeling, sensibility. I'm from Romania. My poetry isn't very good, but my prose is allright. Despide this, i must confese that "Tears of inert clouds" is a simple image, but a beautiful one, everytime. | |
| = Gracias.!! | Joshua Vasquez Butawan [23.Oct.05 10:03] |
| thanks for the comment, I guess you've seen an image out of my text, It's a pleasure to hear from such a fine romanian, that my text is nice, perhaps I believe that language is not a hinder in poetry, you can either be powerful even if you are not a native speaker of a certain language! thnx again for the comment and compliment | |
| = silver darkness | Edilberto González Trejos [24.Nov.05 00:59] |
| Ditto to Dana. In addition, there is always that sublime touch of silver darkness, like a plated rainbow in the dark Songo | |