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Raul Huluban
[25.May.05 23:49]
Text desuet si plictisitor din cale afara. Viata, plans, gand, zbor, nor, sarutare, durere, umbra, moarte. Clisee si imagini goale in fiecare vers. Daca scoti cliseele si elementele de legatura, ramane macar o sugestie?

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= ...	Raul Huluban [25.May.05 23:49]
Text desuet si plictisitor din cale afara. Viata, plans, gand, zbor, nor, sarutare, durere, umbra, moarte. Clisee si imagini goale in fiecare vers. Daca scoti cliseele si elementele de legatura, ramane macar o sugestie?