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 =  breloc
andreea iancu
[07.Jul.06 15:44]
de remarcat ultima strofa.
nu mi-a placut:
-ultimul vres
-comparatia sufletului cu un breloc.
imi place aerul de traditie pe care l-ai dat.
medeea




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