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 =  intrebare
Fanache Emil
[28.Feb.06 00:09]
Pai.... intrebare... In ultimul vers n-ai vrut sa spui:"Si-ascult cum chemarea piere"? adica ar suna mai bine, ar fi si rima...
Cu stima,
Ialin




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