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 =  greseli
andreea iancu
[24.Jul.06 11:27]
laura,
in primul rand ai mai multe greseli: litere in puls, n-ai diacritice, around se scrie cu doi r. iar textul ai putea sa-l rescrii si sa concretizezi ideea; renunta la civil, cotidian, banal: ultima strofa.
medeea



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