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The poem is well written, well felt.
I would advise reconsidering the use of the def article for both "eternity" & "times". Neither the poem's balance, nor the concepts' ultimacy require it.
Also, a stanza rearranging may benefit the poem's subtle rhyming.

Rcm



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