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Iulian Poetrycă
[17.Feb.07 11:57]
as inlocui numai "la" din cel de-al treilea vers cu "pe"; in rest e perfecta, enachitza vacarescu reincarcat ;)
p.s.: mai lasati omul sa respire, nu-l tineti numai in atelier, ca poate se dexcurajeaza
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