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= ideea e buna dar fi putin mai atent la exprimare
Elisabeta Simon
[02.Jun.07 12:33]
in strofa a treia exista o nepotrivire de rime...iar in prima strofa ai repetat acelasi lucru de doua ori...

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= ideea e buna dar fi putin mai atent la exprimare	Elisabeta Simon [02.Jun.07 12:33]
in strofa a treia exista o nepotrivire de rime...iar in prima strofa ai repetat acelasi lucru de doua ori...