| = !!! | Marius Surleac [17.Apr.08 14:29] |
| Again, the basic idea of the text is nice but you have to mix words together, to mix the expression and stanzas, to make one stanza to be the impulse for the next one and so on (Ex. for few stanzas: “cant” with “can’t”; "I'm waiting for the truth/to appear, so I can hold you in my arms"; "the feeling of love/will never pass over ...) – so maybe the text will not be in the Workshop anymore. Hope you don't mind! Cheers! | |
| = ... | Daniela Voicu [30.Apr.08 11:58] |
| a basic ideea ...yes ..i am a big writer ..without the coments ...but thanks to look on my site ....good day | |