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 =  I'm not save?
John Willy Kopperud
[27.Sep.08 15:48]
Should that be I'm not saved, or I'm not safe?
Just asking
Cheers from Willy

 =  Just keep in touch Sir!
Edgar A. Baguio
[28.Sep.08 16:23]
Yeah, Thanks Sir John. It should be in the past form. I also changed "is past" to "ended" to be more concise I guess.
I appreciate your valued comment.

 =  Your alterations do improve...
John Willy Kopperud
[28.Sep.08 16:39]
...the rhythm and the logic of your tale. Not half bad, Edgar!
Cheers from Willy




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