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 =  toti simtim uneori la fel
ciutura carmen luminita
[14.Feb.09 17:06]
ultima strofa m-a impresionat , adevarata intensitate deprimarea e bine gradata in primele strofe si totusi lipseste lacrima din coltul ochiului ! la care m-as fii asteptat. amical , lumiere

 =  frumoasa
GHERMAN ADRIAN
[20.Feb.09 21:08]
primul vers imi pare fortat




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