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ciutura carmen luminita
[23.Feb.09 07:56]
ar fii mai curat fara "insaTi"-Tu curgi clara" si acel "intru","din" ar fii mai potrivit; "clara" mai are si el sinonime; "Si nu ma satur sa te simt" e coplesitor,cuprinde toata ideea poemei!Amical, lumiere



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