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 =  miroase a toamna
slavu diana
[19.Aug.12 06:56]
...ma obsedeaza chiar clepsidra toamnei
si ingerii si frunza si nisipul
nu stiu daca imi va ajunge timpul
si daca am permisiunea ..doamnei,

Florina Ladislau,
cu respect si placerea cititului acestui prim poem de toamna,
gasesc metafore cuminti si ceva tristete (tristetea din... dotarea toamnei!)
cu sinceritate , Diana Slavu



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