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= everything is well when it ends well
adriana anusca
[05.May.05 14:16]
you have words, you have imagination, it's good that grief, sadness and mourning will turn into hope and '... fall in his forgiveness'.
adriana
= adriana, thanks for passing by
Maria Schuler
[06.May.05 21:27]
it's one of my few tries at staying within the borderlines of metric rules. I'm not such a fan of these rules, I do like how it came out though.
Well I'm glad the message got through to you, the images...even to me the poem's a bit ezoterical. It took me quite a while to figure out where did all those words come from, while in my grace.

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= everything is well when it ends well	adriana anusca [05.May.05 14:16]
you have words, you have imagination, it's good that grief, sadness and mourning will turn into hope and '... fall in his forgiveness'. adriana

= adriana, thanks for passing by	Maria Schuler [06.May.05 21:27]
it's one of my few tries at staying within the borderlines of metric rules. I'm not such a fan of these rules, I do like how it came out though. Well I'm glad the message got through to you, the images...even to me the poem's a bit ezoterical. It took me quite a while to figure out where did all those words come from, while in my grace.