| = sweet cup of tea | Vasilescu Alvin Bastian [19.May.05 17:44] |
| I've read the romanian version too, but I did not left a comment... I sort of had a feeling that you would post your poem in english too and...now I have the chance to leave my opinion. Deep melancholy! I sometimes watch minutes and minutes in the cup of tea, hoping to see beyond the borders of this world...and it doesn't work everytime... Anyway, you've realised an enchating fragrance through this haiku (rain scent and lime scent), fragrance which goes right into the soul's core. Thank you for this sweet cup of tea, dear Dara! I've enjoyed it 'til the last drop...of rain... Best wishes! ...Bastian... | |
| = spring smell | Grosu Luiza-Oana [20.May.05 02:43] |
| it's an interesting and beautiful view of the spring's rain. i can even smell the aroma of the linden flower. let me be the raining grain... | |
| = Natural Joy | Edilberto González Trejos [20.May.05 06:11] |
| DARA, This haiku has all the elements to rejoice at the Eastern wisdom, expressed through your well-penned verses... Every word with a weight of its own, still everything flowing so well in your poem... I could actually smell the rose, sense the humidity and hear the sound of the falling drop... SONGO | |