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= welcome new member!
Laurenţiu Ion
[01.Jul.09 12:50]
this is an awesome text
well written
the lines are quite powerful in their simplicity
the only thing I wasn’t crazy about was the title, but that could just be me
I think your text needs a title more attractive for us, your readers

so, keep posting new texts and you'll receive good feedback
good luck!

best regards, laur

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= welcome new member!	Laurenţiu Ion [01.Jul.09 12:50]
this is an awesome text well written the lines are quite powerful in their simplicity the only thing I wasn’t crazy about was the title, but that could just be me I think your text needs a title more attractive for us, your readers so, keep posting new texts and you'll receive good feedback good luck! best regards, laur