| = Petru | Corina Gina Papouis [29.Jul.09 16:20] |
| I would let go of the word the before the silence (last line!).. just a suggestion.. Otherwise a sensitive poem... Regards, Corina | |
| = Corina | Petru Dincã [29.Jul.09 23:10] |
| Thank you, Corina! See you around, Peter | |
| = ... | Veronica Valeanu [30.Jul.09 20:47] |
| you have a good perspective of blurring the amplitude as scene but it would be also interesting to make the perception more accute that's why i have this sensation that the poem isn't finished the slide seems to be fit towards an accute point V.V. | |