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 =  dear Ned
Corina Gina Papouis
[24.Aug.09 21:22]
although somewhere between bipolar and psychosis, the message of this text is intriguing.

a few nags: SOB - ?I know what that means but others might not, smile and care(s) - no s there, soft-walled (instead of walls), I knew again that I want(ed) her to..past tense...
I apologized if i missed any.

Thank you, Ned for the above!:)
Cheers,
Corina

 =  er
Corina Gina Papouis
[24.Aug.09 21:24]
*apologize




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