= =Colours! | Gunsel DJEMAL [29.Aug.09 13:12] |
Dear Danu nice short poem, please change "colors" to english version "colours". | |
= Ok | Danut Gradinaru [29.Aug.09 14:58] |
You are right! Thanks ( teşekuler ) ! | |
= ! | Corina Gina Papouis [29.Aug.09 15:03] |
is words there (plural!) and fluidly (adverb!). please make those changes so we can allow this text on the main page! Thank you! PS and to clarify colours/ colors are both correct versions of the same word: first one is English, second one is American. Provided you don't mix and match within the same text it is ok. | |
= and | Corina Gina Papouis [29.Aug.09 15:28] |
which not wich | |
= Yes! | Danut Gradinaru [29.Aug.09 20:07] |
Yes i doing. Thank you Corina! | |
= ... | Marius Surleac [29.Aug.09 21:19] |
Danut, I suggest to pay a bit more attention to the language used in comments ... some correct usage would be fine. Also, make a spell check before posting the texts, it's not so good to get in this stage word by word, after numerous verifications. | |
= re Marius | Danut Gradinaru [29.Aug.09 23:27] |
Understand, but is not easy for me. Thank you! | |
= and yet another!:) | Corina Gina Papouis [30.Aug.09 12:44] |
I know that enough talk has been made around this text, BUT, I have yet another suggestion to make: the is really unnecessary here, both in the title and in your first line: the poetry just doesn't sound right! So, it would be great if you can get rid of the THE!:)) cheers, Corina | |
= + | Danut Gradinaru [30.Aug.09 21:46] |
Thanks for suggestions and visit! | |