= indeed | Corina Gina Papouis [09.Sep.09 23:00] |
love has a panoramic view in this poem: I enjoyed its musicality, is light and refreshing like a cup of Earl Grey on a Sunday afternoon. The change of 'deep' to 'plunge' sounds better, too.:) Cheers, Corina | |
= yes, | Laura Cherecheº [10.Sep.09 18:35] |
it is pure, eternal love playing freely in the universe. glad you enjoyed it; hey, the Earl Grey is on me :-) Cheers! | |