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 =  hmm
Corina Gina Papouis
[05.Feb.10 21:09]
some of the expressions here are stating the obvious:
'he saw a city with buildings'
are there cities without?

not quite flawless either...

needs some work to make this one shine.
cheers,
Corina

 =  to Corina Gina Papouis
slavchyk
[08.Feb.10 18:56]
here refers to the city as something big, stony, with all its buildings, roads and factories ...
have the right to bring to shine
thanks ...

 =  slavchyk
Corina Gina Papouis
[10.Feb.10 15:57]
Could you please post the text in your native language on the Russian version of Agonia. Many people here don't understand Russian and we have to be fair to our readers.
Thanks for your understanding!

 =  to Corina Gina Papouis
slavchyk
[10.Feb.10 18:51]
I placed the same two texts in English first and the second is the same but the Ukrainian language

 =  ?
Corina Gina Papouis
[10.Feb.10 19:16]
so what is the point of displaying them here? We can only allow texts in English on this site. I suggest you choose the appropriate flag/ language icon in the top right hand corner for the translations and post them there for the Ukrainian readers to enjoy them.
Many thanks!




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