| = :) | Corina Gina Papouis [12.Feb.10 21:54] |
| Hi Ioana! a well balanced text: flow of language as well as shape. Please enjoy a higher level on Agonia so you may post from now texts without editors' verification. Regards! | |
| + A fine rhythm in this one and- | John Willy Kopperud [14.Feb.10 18:51] |
| -and it goes to prove you don't need a fixed meter to make it sound musical. So much better than a poem of yours I commented on before. Here you completely avoid being too obvious! Cheers from Willy | |
| = Danke! Corina ยง Willy | Ioana Geier [21.Feb.10 18:35] |
| Thanks for your visit and comm... All the best! Ioana | |