| + when words are futile | Corina Gina Papouis [19.Jul.10 16:36] |
| loved what you did with the portrait of that moment...in particular the last verse of the first stanza: 'In her short mouth a butterfly cries for help' the poem is like a take off in slow motion, each slide a Dali like piece of art... great! | |
| = Corina | Diana Todea [19.Jul.10 20:05] |
| Thank you, Corina, for the star and appreciation. I meant to shock a bit in this poem and I succeeded. Cheers! | |