| = . | Veronica Valeanu [17.Nov.10 17:02] |
| skin, not skins i suggest you to eliminate the last 4 lines plus - make it more compact | |
| = . | Costin Tanasescu [17.Nov.10 17:50] |
| no way, it's "skins". i cant kill the meaning of the poem(i'm talking about the last four lines). thank you. | |
| = either way... | Corina Gina Papouis [17.Nov.10 17:56] |
| skin might sound better in English but not if the author denies it..it was about the skin of two people...the decision is entirely his...I mean yours..:) | |