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 =  Painting Sea's in Oil Colours
Wendy Mary Lister
[17.Sep.11 10:14]
Really do like the last stanza, lovely flow to your poem Sarb,

 =  Gratitude
Sârb Olimpia
[18.Sep.11 08:31]
Though the previous lines do not seem so "glamorous", they play their important part in the poem, they prepare the reader to welcome the surprise of Beauty. Proportionately speaking, a poem is similar to a many-faceted diamond...Its faulty facets show the core of the poem to advantage. Thank you very much, Wendy, to view this with a friendly eye. Olimpia

 =  Painting Seas In Oil Colurs
Wendy Mary Lister
[24.Sep.11 21:48]
Your most welcome Sarb, I enjoyed the whole poem, as you said 'It prepared the reader to indulge the beauty.' Stunning. I love Art, and I could feel the scenery as if viewing an Oil painting, which compliments very well.




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