| = . | Veronica Vãleanu [17.Jan.13 14:49] |
| I really liked the ending:[I don't know, but if you've got the privilege of holding with your mortal lips a Cuban cigar, never forget asking for the fire...] | -yet, I'm not sure whether you meant [never forget to ask for the fire]= action or [never forget asking...] meaning [that you have asked]=fact maybe it could work both ways what I liked less: the rhetorical question [What do I understand by limitations? Well, " - because of the tone you are forced to use in that point there is a typo here [any of it's two giants] | |
| = corrected... | Romulus Campan [17.Jan.13 16:39] |
| Oh, how I hate my iPad living its own proof-reading life... It auto-corrects what I haven't asked for... A nuisance... Thank you, I've corrected the typo. rc | |
| = Thank you Eugenia... | Romulus Campan [19.Jan.13 18:26] |
| Thank you Nia, Your recommendation is truly appreciated:-)) rc | |