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= I wondered about the punctuation. It can be such a vital element, but fluid (esp
Edward Wells II
[19.Mar.16 08:41]
"Someone caressed me with eyes,
that had blossomed roses hands
thoughts haven’t met them anymore,
when I cleared the dreams way."

This stanza has a very different quality than the others. This is the stanza I sat with.
The last line returns so close to the quality of this stanza. Thanks for that.

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= I wondered about the punctuation. It can be such a vital element, but fluid (esp	Edward Wells II [19.Mar.16 08:41]
"Someone caressed me with eyes, that had blossomed roses hands thoughts haven’t met them anymore, when I cleared the dreams way." This stanza has a very different quality than the others. This is the stanza I sat with. The last line returns so close to the quality of this stanza. Thanks for that.